Editing is a struggle, and ideally, I’m only adding a word here and there, rather than deleting. It hurts to highlight an entire page and press that “delete” key!
Excerpt from book 2!
“Sephron caught the blow as if he were playing with a child. He would not kill this giant as quickly as the last. No, this time he would savor every single drop of precious life before death came. He licked his lips, hungered by the beautiful feast within his grasp.”